1) The pitch
2) The reflection
All of the comments I received
asked for 1) the price of my product and 2) a more attention-grabbing
introduction. I added this and put less emphasis on the price because there is no way for me to gauge what that would be at this time. I also think I need to memorize my script in the future, instead of trying to read it off of a screen.
3) What did you change?
For my pitch I decided
to change my introduction, because that was the main complaint with my pitch. By doing this I think I made my idea seem better by simply adding a few sentences and adding more enthusiasm. How you hold yourself and focusing on being comfortable in front of the camera are two very important aspects of giving an elevator pitch.
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